It is becoming increasingly popular to have a year off between finishing school and going to university. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this?

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modern life majority of people have prefered graduating from

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to

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society.

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advantageous

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selection of community has illustrated that, to become educated and to know educational campus have

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influences in life. More precisely, to proceed from

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make a chance to finish

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early age for individuals. According to some who graduates from

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to

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are able to found own career and business with getting skills what they obtain them from educational systems. I reckon that

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it helps to

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condition due to people should close your life with one.

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marriage in society can support

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statistical population of

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has disadvantageous. I consider that people who

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in society can not grow. Because it created new workers and specialists for government according to

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unemployment have multiplied in community. Every year each country try to divide maximum workplaces for working citizens.

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, to educated have to become with limits and they make a comprehensive decision for their educational plans. To sum up, consistent educated have advantages and disadvantaged for individuals. They must reckon everything for their future career and business.