Some people think that the internet has brought people closer together while other think that people and community are become more isolated Discuss both views and give your opinion.
As we all know, the internet is a huge mine of possibilities.
For example
, due to that
we are able to communicate with Add a comma
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the
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people
from a long distance. Without the
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access
we would not be able to be in touch with humans we care about. But, there are Add a comma
,access
also
people
, who reckon that mobile devices has
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have
a
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an
unfortune
influence on us, when it comes to connections in real Correct your spelling
unfortunate
life
, such
as relations with the community. This
essay will disscuse
both sides of the argument before making the final decision.
With regards to the new technologies, citizens from one country can make online friends from various parts of the world. If they have had a conversation with each Correct your spelling
discuss
oder
, they would have Correct your spelling
other
broaden
their minds and Change the verb form
broadened
share
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shared
experiances
. Correct your spelling
experiences
for Example
, this
means that we can become closer with
different cultures and Change preposition
to
undestand
their Correct your spelling
understand
life-style
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lifestyle
In addition
, my friends from volunteering workcamps can easily connect with me, in order to check on me and ask how it is going. Unless the existence of the internet, they would not know how I am.
On the other hand
, some people
tend to forget about real life
around them. Online life
becomes more important,
than their relations with parents or the community. If they had not had Remove the comma
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controling
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controlling
this
situation, they would have lost vital for them
close friends and would have Correct pronoun usage
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became
lonely. Change the verb form
become
Likewise
, after some time they have realised this
, but it have
been already too late. Change the verb form
has
For instance
, some of my peers are compleatly
addicted to the applications Correct your spelling
completely
such
as Instagram or Facebook, due to these, they have prefered to stay alone in their rooms, rather than talking with the family. It has a huge inpact
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impact
for
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on
futer
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future
life
,
because these citizens have no one Remove the comma
apply
who
they can trust and they lose social skills.
To sum up, The internet has significantly made us connected with the rest of the world. I am strongly concerned, that all the advantages are Change the pronoun
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hightly
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highly
overshadowing
any drawbacks. Wrong verb form
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People
should be able to in the right moment return to the life
around them, so as not to regret losing vital humans for them.Submitted by anna.greczylo on
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