The maps below show the centre of a small town called Islip as it is now, and plans for its development. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The maps below show the centre of a small town called Islip as it is now, and plans for its development.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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These two maps display the central location of a small town which is called Islip, as in the present time and in the planned development.
Firstly
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, the present situation of the school, housing and park in the south of the map will be remained, with exception of expanding in school and minimizing the park. As it is noticeable, no demolishing will be happening in the facilities, though it will have new constructions.
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, some buildings and places will be constructed in various directions. More carriageways and special roads will be built, around and in the middle of the map. Apart from that, a new bus station area and parking space will be located
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to the shopping centre in the northern part of the downtown. Another eye-catching change will be the new extra
housings
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housing
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in diverse locations, in both
north
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and south sections of the central shops. All in all, with some developments in the future, the given centre of the town will be quite likely to have more sites of useful services for citizens,
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as;
housings
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housing
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with
car
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a car
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park place and
shopping
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a shopping
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centre.
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Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "maps" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "present" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • pedestrian-only zone
  • dual carriageway
  • current
  • surrounded by
  • propose
  • infrastructure
  • bus station
  • car park
  • residential housing
  • traffic flow
  • connectivity
  • green spaces
  • recreational areas
  • development plans
  • main features
  • town center
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