Some people say that professional workers such as doctors, nurses and teachers who make a greater contribution to society should be paid more than sports athletes and entertainment stars. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is assumed that the payment for those whose jobs require special skills should be higher than that of those working in the field of entertainment like sportsmen or actors. From my own perspective, I completely disagree with

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statement. The essay will elaborate more on the reasons for the disapproval.

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of all, in my opinion, it is the distinctive features of each occupation that determine the different levels of income.

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, being d

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means that you will earn a

relatively stable wages

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no matter how hard you try. Outstanding performance in working, in

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case, is likely to receive encouragement rather than any kinds of incentives. Meanwhile, the paying features of celebrities are o

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he opposite. Their earning is not fixed. The more they are loved by the public, the higher amount they will be paid.

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, their salary is indeed unlimited. If they wish for an increase in the salary, they can devote themselves even more and persuade everyone that they totally deserve the love of the audiences or fans.

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, when it comes to the value of each type of j

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some may argue that professionals provide other people with a number of benefits in terms of health and knowledge;

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, it is reasonable for them to receive a greater amount.

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, I would defend that every occupation has its own merits. If curing helps individuals alleviate their pains and teaching enlightens their lives,

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able to heal them mentally.

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, when a person is diagnosed as being prone to cancer, doctors can provide him with appropriate treatments or physical impact.

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ental health that plays a significantly crucial role in his recovery. When watching movies or hearing stories relating to the success in overcoming hurdles and diseases, the p

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patients

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may find himself in these films or stories, which puts a certain influence on his mind to d

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his determination of defeating his own difficulties.

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, the celebrities who participated in the movies

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contribute hugely to the healing of that person. In conclusion, I believe that famous stars have to do their utmost to make their living a

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others. What they do makes c

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contribution to t

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ociety, so it is completely fair if they are able to earn more owing to their special talents.