being a celebrity such as a famous film star or sports personality brings problems as well as benefits. Do you think that being a celebrity has more benefits or more problems?

The whole adults more than following the character modal and they more prefer to about It and being famous parson about any field bringing problems aa well as benefits

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my opinion, I consider that celebrity increasing both but Bigger benefits about It and little problems . On the one hand,all individuals contacting the social networking and they watch all action about all fields and they more prefer to follow the act modal I explain It Nowadays more than crowds many chances of copy famous people In present

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the boxer grinder because he is a star about

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field and my friend all activities copie and he playing boxing because he

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to look same .

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,According to It is big benefits because stars bring more advantages.

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, VIP crite little bit problems in society because more than adults follow the stars and they more try to cope but It is not

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other words,In my country all over the individuals take good

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and they try to any filled and they

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if would try but some people only try to cover role modal

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shine in self activities they more

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,It is only one big disadvantage about It because teenagers more looking celebrities and they not understand self-move. In my conclusion ,

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generation more prefer to cover the popular gentlemen and they doing same Yet, the community should be chosen only good stuff about It and do not try to full up with.