Some people believe that it is good to share as much information as possible in science research, business and academic world. Others believe that some information is too important or too valuable to be shared freely. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Today due to development in technology a plethora of
people
have access to internet
and they can get Add an article
the internet
information
easier than individuals who used to live in the past. These days some people
are of the opinion that it is good to share
the acquired knowledge
and it is beneficial for many people
who need to learn something, while other group
believe that it is not acceptable to Change the wording
groups
share
the precious information
with others freely. I agree with the second
group,
because someone who acquired Remove the comma
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knowledge
a piece of knowledge
knowledge
has tried hard and has spent money and time to get the information
. In the forthcoming paragraphs, I shall explain my point of view.
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On
one
hand, it is argued that it is an appropriate action to teach our Correct article usage
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knowledge
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fields
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Moreover
, who
has a craft or science can teach his Correct pronoun usage
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knowledge
to everyone freely through tutorials on the internet or other Correct your spelling
media
medias
. Correct your spelling
media
For example
, nowadays they are many free tutorials on the
YouTube and other websites as videos and books that can be downloaded by everyone. In Correct article usage
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this
case, someone who needs these data can have access to them easily.
On the other hand
, the other group believe that due to value
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the value
information
and beside
the hard getting of Replace the word
besides
knowledge
, it is hard and even impossible to give them to ordinary people
without any cost. To put in
another way, some Correct your spelling
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people
have tried toughly and sometimes they had dedicated many years to attain a
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knowledge
a piece of knowledge
knowledge
or learn a craft and they can’t share
their information
to others without getting money. For instance
, they are many programmers that sale
their tutorials on their websites and they don’t Replace the word
sell
share
them freely.
In summary, I think that although
devoting science to every person is an excellent action, I think it is fair to determine a price for the information
and people
can achieve the witting by paying it’s
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