Some people believe that it is good to share as much information as possible in science research, business and academic world. Others believe that some information is too important or too valuable to be shared freely. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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Today due to development in technology a plethora of
people
have access to
internet
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and they can get
information
easier than individuals who used to live in the past. These days some
people
are of the opinion that it is good to
share
the acquired
knowledge
and it is beneficial for many
people
who need to learn something, while other
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believe that it is not acceptable to
share
the precious
information
with others freely. I agree with the
second
group
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because someone who acquired
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knowledge
has tried hard and has spent money and time to get the
information
. In the forthcoming paragraphs, I shall explain my point of view.
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hand, it is argued that it is an appropriate action to teach our
knowledge
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that we are professional to others.
Moreover
,
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someone who
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has a craft or science can teach his
knowledge
to everyone freely through tutorials on the internet or other
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medias
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.
For example
, nowadays they are many free tutorials on
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YouTube and other websites as videos and books that can be downloaded by everyone. In
this
case, someone who needs these data can have access to them easily.
On the other hand
, the other group believe that due to
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of some
information
and
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the hard getting of
knowledge
, it is hard and even impossible to give them to ordinary
people
without any cost. To put
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another way, some
people
have tried toughly and sometimes they had dedicated many years to attain
a
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knowledge
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knowledge
or learn a craft and they can’t
share
their
information
to others without getting money.
For instance
, they are many programmers that
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their tutorials on their websites and they don’t
share
them freely. In summary, I think that
although
devoting science to every person is an excellent action, I think it is fair to determine a price for the
information
and
people
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costs.
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