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there was a bloody question from Otago University regards to your application. Write a brief letter to explain your reason to do so

To Otago
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 My name is Ann – Do Thi Hang Nga. I am writing
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 related to the
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 relevant to my Bachelor of Business Administration. I declare that there are only two documents that I receive from my
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 in Vietnam when I graduated in 2011, which is :1 – The certificate ( only 1 page), and 2 – The
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 ( only 1 page). I uploaded to Otago
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 these two documents. There were truthly no any more documents attached to those document regarded to the
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 relevant to my Bachelor of Business Administration. My
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 about how the
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 about how
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 regarding to my
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 relevant to my Bachelor of Business Administration. If you need
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 regards to my application, please let me know, I am more happy to provide it as soon as I can. Kind regrads

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The Greeting

Depending on the style and aim of the letter, you will need to adapt your greeting.

Always start an informal letter in the ways:

  • Dear + name
  • Hi / Hello + name

‘Dear...’ is more appropriate, so stick with this.

For a formal letter there are two options for the greeting:

  • Use Dear Sir or Madam if you don’t know the name of the person you are writing to.
  • Use Dear + surname if you do know their name, e.g. Dear Mr Smith or Dear Mrs Jones.

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