Universities should accept equal numbers of male and female students in every subject. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Many people thought that the amount of girls' and boys'
number
should be Fix the agreement mistake
numbers
same
in each subject.I totally agree and support Correct article usage
the same
this
statement.
Nowadays many universities accepting
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accept
equal
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an equal
the equal
number
of male and female students at
all classes.Dividing them equally is the best proper method by looking at the others thoughts.If the same amount of Change preposition
in
pupil
will gather in a group,they can easily assimilate their knowledge together,simultaneously.Fix the agreement mistake
pupils
For example
,one of my psychologists
friends claim thatChange to a genitive case
psychologist's
psychologists'
,
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apply
this
project will lead them to being
mentally strong and aids to avoid Change the verb form
be
from
detrimental characters,Change preposition
apply
such
as being selfish,ashamed and the
most especially saves from being sedentary people, during their entire life.The same Correct article usage
apply
number
of members which is studied in a class brings them many benefits and leads to bright
future.
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a bright
On the other hand
,there are so many layers between human beings.Looking at the muslims
lifestyle,they restricted the Change the capitalization
Muslims
ideo
of studying together. Correct your spelling
idea
Furthermore
,if boys number
make up huge numbers than females,they may often bully Fix the agreement mistake
numbers
with
each other and Change preposition
apply
this
situation will baffle others from their specialties
. They can not focus on the subject,because of Change the spelling
specialities
noisy
sphere.Add an article
the noisy
a noisy
For instance
:In some countries
the government protested that statement which we convey above.They Add a comma
,countries
prefer
accept male teenagers than females at university.
In conclusion,universities and high schools should accept Add the particle
toprefer
equal
Change the article
an equal
the equal
number
of students in every subject.It will lead to bright
future,and good manners Correct article usage
a bright
today's
youth.Change preposition
in today's
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite