Countries are becoming more and more similar because people are able to buy the same products anywhere in the world. Do you think this is a positive or negative development?

Currently, technological advancements are facilitating

nations

’

developments

Fix the agreement mistake

development

show examples

. It seems different

countries

have essentials of producing or importing same goods.

This

phenomenon has had plenty

creative

Change preposition

of creative

show examples

outcomes for most

countries

,

Remove the comma

apply

show examples

and causes similarity among

nations

. On the one hand, social infrastructures have played a critical role in the quality of life. Providing that

nations

ad access to the same products, societies might have

same

Add an article

the same

show examples

quality of life.

This

causes social justice among various

countries

.

Moreover

, it is generally accepted that all

nations

include a number of talented persons. In developing

countries

which

Correct pronoun usage

that

show examples

suffer from

lack

Correct article usage

a lack

show examples

of critical means of

Fix the agreement mistake

improvement

show examples

improvements

Add a comma

,improvements

show examples

those talents might never

fulfill

Change the spelling

fulfil

show examples

themselves. It appears accessing to same products could remedy the circumstance.

Finally

, the

las

Correct your spelling

last

show examples

and maybe the most staple positive outcome of more similarity among

nations

is

better

Add an article

the better

show examples

political relationship between governments.

This

not only does reduce tensions between

countries

but

also

ameliorate economic affairs between them. Better political and financial

relationship

Fix the agreement mistake

relationships

show examples

among

countries

might cause decent benefits for citizens.

For instance

, vital medical technologies transfer to less developed

countries

. A

world

without any serious tension

results

Add the preposition

inresults

fromresults

show examples

lower portion of GDP which stands for

gross

Add an article

the gross

a gross

show examples

domestic product for military budget; Hardly could anyone deny the influences of these events. It might be said that

,

Remove the comma

apply

show examples

many economics have been deepened on lack of some goods in various locations of the

world

and the access to same product causes catastrophic results for them.

However

,

positive

Add an article

the positive

a positive

show examples

outcome of a

world

full

similar

Change preposition

of similar

show examples

nations

outweighs its negative aspects. To conclude, it appears wise to consider more similar

countries

advantageous for everyone, since it is bringing lots of benefits. As an example, A

world

without any potential war.