You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. You and your family are living in rented accommodation in an English speaking country. You are not satisfied with the condition of some of the furniture. Write a letter to your landlord. In your letter introduce yourself explain what is wrong with the furniture say what action you would like the landlord to take You do NOT need to write any addresses.

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Joseph, I am the new renter of your appartement, and I am writing now to inform you about some problems I and my family are facing with the current furniture.

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, I would like to request you an effective fix on your part as soon as possible. I am China Tarhini who contacted you a month ago after regarding your advertisement on the website regarding your appartement for rent. After signing the contract between us, I explained to you that I am planning to move with my family to the flat as soon as possible. We have already moved a week ago but since our arrival, we are facing some problems regarding the furniture and I would be glad to take some of your time for explaining briefly the situation.

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, the air-condition placed in the living room is making a lot of noise by which we are feeling uncomfortable while settling afternoon.

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, there is water leakage in the master’s bathroom, which is a very annoying issue to cover all the floor with water when taking a shower. We will be very glad if you take an action with fixing these problems as soon as possible. My parents are old, and they are very uncomfortable with these current circumstances. Thanks for your consideration. Yours faithfully, China Tarhini.

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Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

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Lexical resource: 8.0

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