The charts below shows the propertion of the energy produced from different sources in a country between 1985 and 2003
The pie chart depicts the generation of electricity from various
sources
in a country over the period of 18 years, from 1985 to 2003.
As shown in the pie chart, there are six different proportions of sources
such
as natural gas, coal, hydrogen, nuclear, oil, and other renewable sources
.
According to
statistics, the generation of electricity by using natural gas rose from 13 per cent in 1985 to 23 per cent in 2003. Usage of coal was 8% in 1998 after 18 years, it got increased by 5%. There was a negligible amount of growth in other renewable sources
.
In 1985, utilization
of oil crossed half of the proportion, Correct article usage
the utilization
however
, in 2003, it fell drastically (39 per cent). Nuclear power sunk to 17% from 22%. Hydrogen power remains unchanged over the
period of time.
Shortly stated, Coal, nuclear, and other resources continued to grow, Correct article usage
a
while
nuclear and oil decreased. However
, hydrogen remains constant.Submitted by KUSHAL.GOVARDHAN on
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