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Some people think personal happiness is directly related to economic success, while others believe this depends on other factors. Discuss both sides and give your own opinion.

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In our contemporary society, many
people
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 tend to find happiness by running after
money
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. While some thought that economics is not our final goal in
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.
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 essay will discuss both trends and explain my idea about
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 problem.
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 with, financial stability provides a perfect platform that helps
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 live in
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 modern
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.
People
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 need
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 for basically needed in
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 as paying the bills and helping their children go to school.
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, in some societies in the world,
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 is the measure of
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,
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, in Asian culture, success in
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 means taking care of the family by making lots of
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. If someone who graduated from university and earned for themself but not their parents in the village, they can be called “the looser”.
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,
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 cannot buy most of the important necessaries in
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 as mental health, physical health, and peace inside. While the young generation is working hard every day to make
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 for their
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, lots of elderly are spending their lives in hospitals.
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, research by Queen university in 2020 found that the more young
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 sit and work for more than 10 hours a day, the more likely they are to have osteoarthritis after the age of 35. In conclusion, from my point of view, budgetary accomplishment is necessary but not all. There are many ways to be happier in
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 without
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 as spending time with family, working out to improve physical health or just enjoying
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 by chilling ways.
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