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Many claim that the fast food industry had a negative effect on the environtment, eating habits, and families. To what extend do you agree or disagree?

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Nowadays, the fast-
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 industry becoming popular in society resulting in negative consequences. I partially agree with
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 issue, which will be elucidated more below.
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 with, the high consumption of processed
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 increases proportionately the risk of diseases not only problems related to the physical body but
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 mental health because of addictive ingredients.
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 would presumably encourage the community to frequently eat prepackaged
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 resulting in several diseases
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 as stroke due to lack of supply of nutrients and protein needs in children.
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 that,
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 would be mentally disturbed because they might consider more to tend to consume prepackaged
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 based on prioritizes taste over nutrition and impact to the surroundings because of many rubbish plastic packaging wastes from the canned
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.consumption.
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, convenience
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 consumption may reduce the togetherness from the family bonds.
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 is because they tend to prefer eating out for short periods of
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 rather than spending
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 eating with their family.
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, eating junk
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 might save a day rather than cooking at home. It would be more efficient for a small family because they can save hours and effort. Take an example,
people
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 who reside alone often eat canned
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. because they prefer to buy fast-
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 to cook at home due to inconvenience and spend a lot of
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 and energy just to eat themselves.
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, convenience
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 industry products probably could be the solution for the community when hungry because the foodstuff is easy to find anywhere.
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, the prepackaged
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 could prevent society from getting ulcer disease due to late eating. In conclusion, eating processed
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several benefits for the community because they can save their
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 to do other activities and it is might
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 could be a solution when
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 starving.
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