Some people think that parents should teach children how to be good members of society. Others, however, believe that school is the place to learn this. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
It is important for
children
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in the community. So some people believe that Fix the agreement mistake
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young
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while others assume Use synonyms
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should learn how to behave well in Use synonyms
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teachers
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Regarding the education of Linking Words
children
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parents
are the Use synonyms
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teacher for every child in daily life. They absolutely behave whatever they learn from their Linking Words
parents
as they always keep in touch with their Use synonyms
parents
in the home while they are young. If the Use synonyms
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and family members are decent people, they will well-behave not only in the family but Use synonyms
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children
will be influenced by the words of their Use synonyms
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manner
and living style. If their guardians are strict, they will Fix the agreement mistake
manners
also
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Similarly
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likely to become good and obedient students at Linking Words
school
when they come from Use synonyms
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family
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On the other hand
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and friends rather than family and Use synonyms
parents
. At that time, Use synonyms
school
becomes essential and important for students in their learning process. It cannot be denied that the importance of Use synonyms
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from
their friends and Change preposition
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teachers
. Some people believe that Use synonyms
children
listen more to their Use synonyms
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so that Use synonyms
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can make them bad or good in Use synonyms
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However
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children
from Use synonyms
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do not need to be worried about the mischievous manner in Fix the agreement mistake
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parents
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