Some people think that parents should teach children how to be good members of society. Others, however, believe that school is the place to learn this. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

It is important for

children

to be taught to become

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good

citizen

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citizens

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in the community. So some people believe that

young

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generation should be learnt from their

parents

while others assume

children

should learn how to behave well in

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society from their

teachers

at

school

. It will be discussed

about

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the different opposing and supporting ideas for both issues in

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essay before I give my opinion. Regarding the education of

children

,

parents

are the

first

teacher for every child in daily life. They absolutely behave whatever they learn from their

parents

as they always keep in touch with their

parents

in the home while they are young. If the

parents

and family members are decent people, they will well-behave not only in the family but

also

in

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society.

In addition

,

children

will be influenced by the words of their

parents

in terms of

behaviors

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,

manner

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manners

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and living style. If their guardians are strict, they will

also

become disciplined teenagers.

Similarly

, they are

also

likely to become good and obedient students at

school

when they come from

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good and disciplined

family

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families

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and

parents

.

Therefore

parents

can overwhelm

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their

children

in everything relating to

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ethics

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of society.

On the other hand

, when they come to

school

-going age, they have to deal more with

teachers

and friends rather than family and

parents

. At that time,

school

becomes essential and important for students in their learning process. It cannot be denied that the importance of

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and classmates

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one of the impacts

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the

children

’s

behavior

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. They will imitate

from

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their friends and

teachers

. Some people believe that

children

listen more to their

teachers

’ words than their

parents

so that

teachers

can make them bad or good in

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school

.

However

,

children

from

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good and well-trained

family

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families

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do not need to be worried about the mischievous manner in

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school

when they have already

taught

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and

known

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what is good and bad for them from their

parents

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their

first

teacher in life.

Moreover

, it can be seen that the naughty students usually come from

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dysfunctional families. In conclusion, both

parents

and

teachers

are

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part of

children

’s learning process throughout their adultery time for discipline,

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and manner. To my view,

parents

are more superior than

teachers

to their

children

as they are truly

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tutor

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in life and can give a guide and support whenever and wherever they need to be told for their personal performance.