A growing number of people feel that animals should not be exploited by people and that they should have the same rights as humans, while others argue that humans must employ animals to satisfy their various needs, including uses for food and research. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Humans
are the most intelligent species on the planet Earth, we have been abusing
animals
since
the
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ancient times for various
purposes
.
However
, some people ascertain that
animals
should not be taken advantage of and should have
same
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rights as
humans
do.
Animals
are being abused for various reasons since ancient times, like
Food
, research, entertainment
purposes
. Many believe that
this
acceptable
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for many reasons as they think anything which is done to ensure human survival is right. Even if
this
means experimenting on
animals
to fight and find
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a cure
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cure
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cures
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for many deadly diseases.
Furthermore
, some believe that
animals
provide more nutritious
food
to
humans
, so if we have to kill
animals
for
food
or other
purposes
,
then
this
is morally acceptable.
Moreover
,
animals
are being kept in cages in
circus
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circuses
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and zoos for
entertainment
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the entertainment
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of
humans
.
However
, I do not believe that these arguments stand up to point if we observe things closely. The
first
reason being
animals
feel as much pain as
humans
do, and they suffer when they are kept in cages for
long
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a long
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period
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periods
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of
times
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time
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. Experimenting on
animals
for unnecessary things should not be encouraged and there should be
a certain restrictions
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certain restrictions
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experimenting
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on experimenting
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on
animals
for research
purposes
. Like,
number
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a number
the number
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of
animals
used for a particular experiment should be limited.
Finally
, it is proven that
humans
can get all nutrition and vitamins they need from vegetables and fruits.
Therefore
, killing
animals
for
food
is not an adequate argument. To sum up,
although
some people argue killing
animals
for research and
food
is ethical, I would argue that there is sufficient evidence to demonstrate that
this
is not the case,
therefore
, steps must be taken to improve the rights of
animals
.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Exploitation
  • Animal welfare
  • Ethical treatment
  • Vegetarianism
  • Veganism
  • Cognitive dissonance
  • Humane
  • Live stock
  • Cruelty-free
  • Bioethics
  • Conservation
  • Habitat preservation
  • Ecosystem
  • Biodiversity
  • Animal testing
  • Synthetic biology
  • Genetic engineering
  • Speciesism
  • Animal husbandry
  • Sustainable farming
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