The Internet has as many disadvantages as it does advantages. To what extend do you agree with this statement?

It is the age of globalization where the

internet

is more accessible to all.

although

one decade's age accessing the

internet

was rear,now due to improvement of technology it is available to the knock and corner of the world.It is obvious that along with huge facilities there are many drawbacks of

air

approach.

However

, I

thus

strongly believe there are many who applied the downside outweigh to benefits.To illustrate that,abuse of

air

connection and conducting organized cybercrime. To commence with,people use

air

devices for different aspects.

although

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less pricey and available for exercising everywhere,nowadays it is mostly made use of evil intention to

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defraud

from

defray

others.

For instance

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rumour which could be socially or politically is common on the

internet

.

As a result

, people easily believe these rumours and

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many

time

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which could occur unexpected incidents.

Therefore

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bedside of the

internet

greatly impacted the community and the country.

On the other hand

,many organized crimes take place on different online sites.cybercrime has been facilitated because of advanced

air

connections.

Moreover

,thearting to others over

internet

is precise activities for cybercriminals.

besides

that in the name of online

business

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the criminals sell illegal drugs which

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our young generation significantly.

For example

,many young people intend to buy drugs by using the

internet

which is very easy to find and available surroundings.

Therefore

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rhythm of airlines need to be more conscious about cybercrime. To conclude,In my ,opinion the

internet

provides many opportunities to carry out various strict tasks.

However

,aside from developing ,

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any organized crime is happening by applying advanced technology.so we should handle

this

more consciously.