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In a number of countries, some people think it is necessary to spend large sums of money on constructing new railways lines for every fast trains between cities. Others believe the money should be spent on improving existing public transport. Discuss both views and give your own opinion?

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A handful of
people
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 believe that it,s important to use a huge amount of money on building a new rail line between cities for the fast trains. while other
people
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 think it is better to consume capital on existing public transportations. To pursue my opinion, it's a good idea to construct more and new public
transportation
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 and railways to provide more facilities.
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 building new railways and roads between cities can provide a fast and safe trip for
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,
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 they can easily approach each city and province without trouble.
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, constructing new public transit can pave the way for
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 to get jobs, so, it can help to reduce the number of unemployed population.
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, working on previous or existing transports will have fewer expenses, and time will be short to be ready for usage. But in
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 way
people
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 will not be able to access modern transit cause in
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 theory we are just repairing our existing
transportation
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,
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 it's a better point of view to construct new roads and lines to provide new public
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 with more facilities and developed technology . To conclude, capitation on the new lines between cities can provide better public
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 but need more budget, while working on existing
transportation
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 may spend less money, but it will provide railways and roads according to previous technology.
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