Being a celebrity such as a famous film star or sports personality brings problems as well as benefits. Do you think that being a celebrity has more benefits or more problems?

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In modern society, commonly argued that being famous has only advantages. But in my opinion,there are some pros and cons that I will discuss in the forthcoming essay. In the

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place, it is undeniable that being famous has many benefits in our life .

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, commonly the celebrities are rich and have good wealth for living without any problems. Especially in

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era that lives become somehow materialistic, the influencers always are able to provide their desire easily.

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people always tend to respect the renowned.

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, 5 years ago an Iranian actor was passing by our city and suddenly he had a car crash in the middle of the night, so there was not anyone to help him until he asked for help on his Instagram and after 30 minutes almost a hundred persons gathered for helping.

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, Some celebrities have issues with their personal life due to their fame. Even every aspect of their lives and choices can be judged by everyone on social media,

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, it is annoying that everywhere they go the paparazzi take pictures from them. In fact, celebrities always are struggling with their fame.

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, if they want to go for a walk may some people force them for giving signatures or take selfies.So they can not have some activity outdoor without bothering. to sum up,

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, there are many benefits for being famous like being rich. But, it is obvious that the drawbacks can have bad impacts on their lives.

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Topic Vocabulary:

Public scrutiny
Intrusive
Endorsements
Sponsorships
Financial security
High-profile collaborations
Social influence
Philanthropic efforts
Trust issues
Mental health challenges
Substance abuse
Pressures of celebrity
Expectations
Disconnect from reality
Normalcy

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Being a celebrity such as a famous film star or sports personality brings problems as well as benefits. Do you think that being a celebrity has more benefits or more problems?

Global warming is one of the most serious issues that the world is facing today What are the causes of global warming and what measures can governments and individuals take to tackle the issue?

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People now days send text massages more frequently than they talk the phone. What are the reasons for this trend ? Do the advantages of texting out weigh the disadvantages ?

You need to borrow some money to pay for something you need for your work or studies. Write a letter to your bank to ask for a loan. In your letter introduce yourself and ask for a loan say why you need the money explain how you plan to pay the money back