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Studying the English language in an English-speaking country is the best but not the only way to learn language. Do you agree or disagree with this statement?

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Studying the
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 in an
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 is always the best way to learn
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English
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. It's not only true for learning
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 it is true for learning every
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. If you had
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 to live in the native habitat of the
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 trying to learn, only
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 you can have the real chance to learn it properly.
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 the
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 is the most important subject of
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most people on Earth in
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 era since it is the most
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 spoken
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 throughout the world. If you'
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 working for an international company
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 you should be able to speak
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 fluently. If you want to travel the world and make your dreams come true,
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 you should speak
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 fluently. In today's world, you can't avoid
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the fact that you should somehow learn and be able to use the skills of speaking
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. Many people try to learn the
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language
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 by themselves. We all have our teachers at our schools and
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 courses in our hometowns. No need to mention online courses and materials. But are they enough? The answer is; no. Because a
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 is basically a living organism. It changes
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. There's no way to keep up with its transformation unless you go to its home
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. Let's say you'
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 trying to learn
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 at home -outside an
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-speaking
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. You may learn all the basics but you can't know what you'
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 missing unless you start living in an
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. To sum up; for all the ones that have the opportunity to go and live in an
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: Go and start a new life there.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • immersion
  • fluency
  • advanced
  • communicate
  • accommodate
  • exposure
  • cultural understanding
  • native speakers
  • educational institutions
  • resources
  • diverse
  • globalized
  • interact
  • self-study
  • online courses
  • tutors
  • language exchange
  • books
  • videos
  • podcasts
  • language proficiency
  • language barrier
  • conversation partners
  • progress
  • motivated
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