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Many companies conduct interviews before making a job offer to someone.
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 essay will argue that
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 is not the most appropriate way to recruit people because an
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 is not a true reflection of a person’s ability. The best method is to give people standardized tests designed to assess on-the-job performance. Conducting interviews is not a very effective recruitment method because it does not give the interviewee a chance to show how good they really are. The
skills
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 tested in an
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,
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 as the ability to communicate in a friendly manner and answer questions without assistance, are the opposite of those required by many jobs.
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, a skilled computer programmer or lab technician may be awkward and used to consult the internet before answering a question, and
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 they would never be able to show how technically proficient they are. Many other examples can be found in other fields. For
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 reason, I believe that the
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 is not the best way to decide whether
employees
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 should be hired or not. A better to find new
employees
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 would be to
test
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 on things that they will actually be doing on the job.
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 is more reliable because it tests the specific
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 they will use on a daily basis and not just an
interview
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 technique. Often, companies will invite someone to their offices for a whole day and ask them to complete routine tasks and ask a manager five feedback on their performance.
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, Facebook gives potential programmers a real program with firewall network protection and ask them to hack into their system.
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, they can evaluate the right abilities of
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.
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 is the reason why I think that a
test
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 should be the best way to select
employees
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. In conclusion, interviews have limitations because they often
test
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 interviewing
skills
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 rather than job-related
skills
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, and a better
test
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 would be to give
employees
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 a challenge that simulates the real job and correctly evaluate their potentials.
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