Many people think that the government should spend more money on providing faster and cheaper means of public transport. Some other think that there are other important factors to take into consideration like (petrol, cost and environment). Discuss both views and give your opinion?
Nowadays, many masses said that ruling parties must invest money in
transportation
like trains and public vehicles which can lead the travelling cheaper as well as faster, while other think inflation, pollution and petroleum are also
main issues which need to be lighten
. Well, in my Change the verb form
be lightened
opinion
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,opinion
transportation
is main
issue for focusing on. Let's discuss both points.
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the main
First
of all, travel is important for survival in daily life. Everyone travels for various reasons like job, education and shopping and so on. Therefore
, everyone chooses their own vehicles for
travel fast . Change preposition
to
Therefore
, sometimes so many
traffic on roads which may cause pollution and accidents that's way, public needs subways and trams to go one place to another in Correct quantifier usage
much
short
time. It will help to save time and traffic and helps to decrease the utilization of petroleum. Add an article
a short
For example
, in Japan, they use trams in every city to make transportation
easy and assessable.
However
, people face problems of inflation in every sector which effect on
their living standards. Change preposition
apply
Public
want Correct article usage
The public
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pollution-free
pollution
free environment that will help them to stay healthy and safe which will only Correct article usage
a pollution
possible
through Add a missing verb
be possible
good
infrastructure of Add an article
the good
a good
transportation
as well as growing several plants. According to survey
, degradation is done because of lack of resources , if Add an article
the survey
a survey
government
make policies and plans to save Add an article
the government
environment
that will definitely work and Add an article
the environment
also
people support them.
In conclusion, although
both issues are genuine for public
so need to improve them as soon as possible, Add an article
the public
transportation
may be solution
for both petroleum and Add an article
the solution
a solution
environment
problems which can be tackled by increasing public transports.Replace the word
environmental
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