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In the future, nobody will buy printed newspapers or books because they will be able to read everything they want online without paying. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

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It is true that modern technology has become an essential tool for
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 in all areas of getting information.
However
, while I accept e-reader is a state-of-the-art reading application
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that let
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 everyone use it, I do not agree with the idea that they will be able to read
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what they
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 want without any money in the future.
First
, it is hard to reach a goal that everyone has an electronic device,
thus
, it will trigger problems for a person who do not own it when he or she wants to read a
newspaper
. I believe that some
elder
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 still
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 a printed
newspaper
 every day because they are accustomed to
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information from reading a real
newspaper
. If e-reader totally
replace
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 the printed
newspaper
, it will
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 them
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being isolated
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 the world.
Therefore
, I am opposed to all the printed
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being vanish
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.
Secondly
, using the technology products for a long time will cause health problems,
such
 as vision deterioration and joint pain. Take
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 as an example, I am nearsighted with 5.5 diopters because I enjoy reading novels on the Net.
Also
, when the weather
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, I always felt my wrist hurt a lot. These two civilization
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 bring me a variety of
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. The
last
 but not least, the author
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 the reader to buy a book so that he can earn money to support his life. In my opinion, purchasing a book both from brick-and-mortar
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bookstore and
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 online shop is a way to encourage the writer. It is not an executable plan that people read all they want on the Net for free. For the reasons mentioned above, it seems to me that people buy printed
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 or books as before and the book online would not be able to read without paying.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • accessibility
  • convenience
  • cost-effective
  • cultural value
  • sentimental value
  • reliability
  • distracting
  • access to
  • digital devices
  • internet
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