Some people believe that they should keep all the money they have earned and should not pay tax to the state.Do you agree or disagree?

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people
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should pay
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tax
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to the
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or not is an argument of great debate. Some
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think that it is
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government's
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responsibility to raise
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from other sectors and should not take the portion of a person's hard
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cash while others stand just opposite of
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opinion. I believe if the
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spend the
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for the benefit of the citizen, as it
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to be for every country, and value the mass
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's opinions and suggestions
how
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on how
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to best use the
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,
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there is nothing wrong with the
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tax paying
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method and rather had many positive reasons to do so. Those who are against the
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tax paying
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system often opine that the
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should never take their hard earning
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for the sake of
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the country's
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development scheme.
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is especially true for those who earn an amount that barely supports his/her family and who are not satisfied with the public service provided by the
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. In many countries,
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have to pay a
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of more than a quarter of the total earning of a year and yet do not get basic facilities like treatment, education and they have to spend their own pocket
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for those purposes.
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is very natural that they become angry about the
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tax paying
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. But
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tax
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, collected from the
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of a country can be a great fund to use for their betterment by the
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. There are lots of poor
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who can be benefited from the
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paid by the others. The
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can build more roads, offer public services, and can introduce other useful
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using the
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. Almost in most
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the
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countries,
people
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who earn more than a predefined amount have to pay
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and not for those who earn less than that amount. So
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is not forcing poor
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to pay
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but those who are able to pay
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.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • contribute
  • welfare
  • public services
  • progressive taxation
  • distribution of wealth
  • civic duty
  • social cohesion
  • tax evasion
  • economic disparities
  • social unrest
  • individual rights
  • societal responsibilities
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