Some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. Others say that there are more important environmental problems. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

A portion of people claims that losing biodiversity is the most concerning
problem
that is
currently happening. While some argue that there are other serious dilemmas that should be taken into consideration
first
.
This
essay will look at both arguments and conclude that global warming should be the
first
priority to tackle since it is the root cause of other problems, including the extinction of plants and animals. On the one hand, it can be argued that the variety of animals and plants is crucial for maintaining the balance of the ecosystem.
For example
, if one particular predator, like lions, becomes extinct, the prey species, mostly herbivores, will exceed and ruin the environment.
Moreover
, if one system is destroyed, others will fall like dominoes and eventually bring disasters to mankind. It is true that
this
problem
is important,
then
again it is not the most significant.
On the other hand
, global warming is much more concerning and requires huge efforts to solve because it is the main reason that triggers other minor troubles,
such
as losing plants and animals species and severe natural disasters. Plus, when a disaster like a flood happens, the economic loss overwhelms, and the damage value of losing species can not be compared. In the past decades, many attempts to alleviate
this
problem
have been implemented, but the result seems to be an immense disparity. From my point of view, solving the main cause is the best way to tackle the situation because it can mitigate the severity of each minor
problem
simultaneously, and
this
will lead to the balance of the ecosystem.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • biodiversity
  • extinction
  • habitat loss
  • ecosystem
  • food chain
  • imbalance
  • interconnected
  • climate change
  • pollution
  • personal actions
  • policy changes
  • education
  • awareness
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