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With the vast increase in online resources today, libraries with print books are not a necessity for today’s society. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your knowledge or experience.

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It is indeed true that digital resources today far outstrip what can be put and stored in
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books
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. Almost any kind of book can now be accessed digitally and those that can’t be will soon be changed to a digital format. Some
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,
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, believe that
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 with
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 are no longer needed. If
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 looks at
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 issue dispassionately, it seems far more logical
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 now should only read
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 digitally. It only requires a single computer or electronic reader and an individual can have access to the history of literature and works on all other fields. The costs involved with
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, typing, printing and distributing
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 would practically disappear and
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 would make things more convenient and much cheaper. An actual library building would be totally unnecessary, as all
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 would need would be a ‘virtual library’ as a website and all works could be accessed through
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 portal. There would not even be any need to leave the house to gain access to anything
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 needed.
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 would seem to be the most logical way of proceeding. Logic,
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 have a long history with humanity and our relationship with real
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 is not something that can be changed overnight. Many
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, including younger readers, feel that there is something special about having a book with real paper and needing to turn pages. There will
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 for the time being be a future for
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 will continue to be especially important, as not all older
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 use computers and e-readers as much as the younger generation. They will still want to read
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 and the library is a cheap and convenient place to find them.
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, if only a few
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 in
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 are available in the future,
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 might be
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 of the few places where they might be accessed. Another purpose that
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 serve is acting as community centres that organise events, education and childcare. Ironically,
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 who cannot afford their own. In spite of the seeming dominance to come of digital
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, I feel that there is and will be a place for
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 with
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 state of affairs might change in the future, but at present, they are important community resources.
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