In some areas of the US, a 'curfew' is imposed, in which teenagers are not allowed to be out of doors after a particular time at night unless they are accompanied by an adult. what is your opinion about this?

Crime is increasing day by day in modern society across every country. In some regions of the US, a 'curfew' is imposed, in which
teenagers
are restricted to be outdoors after a certain time at
night
unless they are accompanied by an adult.
This
essay will discuss the above statement in detail and
thus
will lead to a logical conclusion.
To begin
with, the Government of the US is on a high alert every time they get any suspicious tips from their officials that something bad is about to happen. In
such
cases, police immediately implement curfew in the areas where they thought crime can happen.
Although
people themselves need to be alert as well imposing a curfew seems a better idea as
teenagers
nowadays keep going on
night
outs.
For instance
, If a boy is roaming around alone at
night
and there are chances that he might get robbed or kidnapped as a hostage for some reason. In
such
cases situation gets worse as the life of that child is in danger.
On the other hand
, If
teenagers
are with some group of people or even if with an individual who is mature enough to take care of them
then
it is less likely that any damage can happen to
teenagers
.
Also
, they themselves can go worried free as their parents will have a mental satisfaction that nothing bad can happen.
For example
, if a boy is going out with his father to a medical store, it is less likely that he will get in trouble as compared to if he goes alone. To recapitulate, based on the arguments aforementioned above, I genuinely think that it is better that
teenagers
are not allowed to get outdoors alone after a certain time at
night
unless and until they are accompanied by an adult.
Submitted by Mats Hummles on

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The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

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Example:

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  • Finally
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • enforce
  • juvenile
  • repercussions
  • autonomy
  • adolescence
  • paternalistic
  • delinquency
  • municipality
  • ordinance
  • authoritarian
  • peer pressure
  • social dynamics
  • civil liberties
  • community policing
  • preventative measures
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