In many countries, paying for things using mobile phone (cellphone) apps is becoming increasingly common. Does this development have more advantages or more disadvantages?
In
many
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any
country
, there are many Change to a plural noun
countries
people
using mobile phone
apps
to pay for things
. It has more advantages than disadvantages.
There are many advantages of using mobile apps
to pay for things
. Firstly
, it will be able to help people
save time when they need to pay money
for some things
. For example
, we can pay electric bills or water bills just by some clicks on online apps
, it has just taken some minutes to do. Secondly
, it can save money
for us without using any cash and don't need to pay extra fee for things
. For example
, people
don't need to pay for the transportation to go places where we need to go to
there to pay bills. Remove the preposition
apply
Thirdly
, it is more useful for people
when they are paying for apps
. Society needs this
kind of payment to make our life more modern.
However
, it also
has some disadvantages of using mobile phone
apps
to pay for things
. First
, convenience can make us consume when we use mobile phone
apps
to pay for online shopping. Second
, hackers can take our infomation
through the internet when we do online payments. Correct your spelling
information
For example
, customers can lose control when they buy clothes or equipment from mobile phone
apps
because it's easy to click on apps
to buy new things
. That is
why using mobile phone
apps
to pay for things
can not make us save our
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money
. And hackers will easily take our private information to steal money
from credit cards or bank accounts. There have been many cases of loss of money
when you paid for mobile phone
apps
and had to give your personal information to these apps
.
To summarize, utilizing mobile phone
apps
to pay for items has several drawbacks. However
, it offers more benefits than drawbacks.Submitted by meomy171 on
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