There are some information about sales of Fairtrade-*labelled coffee and bananas in 1999 and 2004 in five European countries.

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The tables demonstrate some data regarding
sales
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of Fairtrade-labelled
coffee
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and
bananas
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in five European nations in 1999 as well as 2004. In general, as
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can be seen from the tables, the highest
sales
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of
coffee
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in 1999 and 2004 were related to
Switzerland
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and the
UK
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, respectively.
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,
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amount
about
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bananas
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were
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the most in
Switzerland
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in both 1999 and 2004.
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, it is worth mentioning that in both
coffee
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and
bananas
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there
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an increase in
sales
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from 1999 to 2004 in roughly all
countries
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. In terms of
coffee
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expenditure, all of the
countries
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had a growth in
sales
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of
coffee
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;
however
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,
this
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growth was quite different among them. By way of illustration, the
UK
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had an explosion in
sales
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of
coffee
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from 1.5 in 1999 to 2004 which was an about 14 times rise compared to what it was in 1999.
Switzerland
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’s and Belgium’s
sales
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almost doubled from 1999 to 2004.
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, Denmark’s and Sweden’s
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were not that substantial. In regard
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the other tables which is related to the
sales
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of
bananas
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, in both 1999 and 2004,
Switzerland
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had the biggest amount of
sales
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with 15 and 47
millions
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of
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euros, respectively. Apart from
Switzerland
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, the
UK
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and Belgium
also
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experienced a significant rise from 1999 to 2004. To be exact, the expenditure of the
UK
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and Belgium were 1 and 0.6 which were reached to 5.5 and 4, respectively. It should be noted that Sweden and Denmark were the only
countries
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which saw a decrease in 2004 compared to 1999. In fact, the
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of
sales
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nearly halved in these
countries
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.
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