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Some people believe that children should be allowed to choose what subjects they study at school. Others argue that everyone should studythe same subjects. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

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In the running days, some people opine that teenagers should be free to choose courses in their school while others believe that there should be uniformity in the subjects they study. In my
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 the primary studies should be the same for everyone but the secondary books must be based on
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individual choice. With the advancement in every field of
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life, teenage studies
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 changed a lot. Now some communities
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 on the point of view of letting the students
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choose books in their schooling time. They support
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 opinion by
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 argument that every person has its own interests and hobbies, along with some
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 mental capabilities based on what each human being has the right to choose how to live and grow. As
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human being around the world has
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 in different circumstances and live in various environments which demands them to be specialized in some particular field of life rather than sticking to the routine.
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,
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children
 born in rich families
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 different priorities as compared to
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 who got birth in a poor community. The chances are that the person who belongs to the well-off house will select business management while the poor one will learn other more
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 skills to earn their bread and butter.
On the other hand
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 think that everybody should study same discipline at their early age so that there should be
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 uniformity in the education sector all around the community.
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 topic help the students to have a better understanding of the world and they will grow together as a society.
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, if every youngster is allowed to make their own choice in the selection of the books it will create a mess in their studies as well as in the entire society. To
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, some educationists believe that students should be allowed to make a choice for their subjects to study at school while others think the opposite. In my
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 the basic courses should be
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 but the specialization should be based on personal preferences and interests.
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    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
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    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
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