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Some organisations believe that their employees should dress smartly. Others value quality of work above appearance. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

#organisations #employees #dress #value #quality #work #appearance
Nowadays, dress code and corporate attire are not obligatory requirements and various
type
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 of companies like organizations
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 are under
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government management or international corporations have been trending to loosen regulations of clothes.
However
,
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 relaxing does not represent for neglectful in casual
uniform
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 and it means individuals need to pay attention
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 what appropriate clothes and accessories that they need to wear while working in high formal level places.
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, I would believe that smartly dressed should exist in most
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office
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environment
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environments
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 because of the following arguments.
First
 of all,
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 of countries which are from Europe and
Americas
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the Americas
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 region seriously respect human freedom that involves common political issues to usual life choices like costumes. According to that reason, organizations whose
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 are from
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above developed
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 continents are not totally strict or tighten their rules about attire because they need to ensure they do not violate
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human rights to avoid involving in
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.
In addition
, employers highly focus on their employee’s achievements and require their personnel to be more effective in contributing and
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in
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 their works, not their
appearances
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.
On the other hand
, I believe that appearance is one of the most vital necessities and it is
also
 an essential key to attract the opposite persons, make a
first
 good impression with strangers and maintain a long term relationship with colleagues or customers.
For instance
, even in some formal meetings of large scale
corporation
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, there are various rules of clothes for
representative
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representatives
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 and
attenders
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 to follow. In conclusion, neat-dressed not only provide confidence for self but
also
 improve the relationship with other people which is noticeably important in bureau or offices, in which emphasizes serious
ambiance
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. In my opinion, employees should encourage their inferiors to dress intelligently.
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