Some people says that the environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals others says that there are more important environmental problems. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion?

In
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21st century, the existence of
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and the problems regarding
environment
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is a crucial question
among
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. It is a major fact that if the world exists, the existence of
environment
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has a major role. Today people are carrying different
opinion
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opinions
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about the
environmental
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such
as some of
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them
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views
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that the major
issues
we face are some of the species of animals and plants became endangered and another opinioned that it is more than that of some environmental
issues
exist.
However
, the current
issues
faced by
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humans are the major environmental
issues
.it is opinioned true that in our time some particular varieties of plants and animals species became endangered.
That is
the major reason behind
this
is
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deforestation and the attack of people in the eco-sensitive zone.to illustrate
this
the species
such
as lion tailored monkey which was seen in the silent valley forest area in Kerala is because
of
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they
are only eats
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a type of jack fruit which was seen in
this
area. But nowadays the humans are entering into their area and destroying their ecosystem. So
this
will
leads
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to the loss
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only the lion tailored monkey but
also
the tree.
In addition
, the other major environmental
issues
we are facing are the excavations, quarrying, soil filling in paddy fields and ponds and the construction of huge buildings, huge number of vehicles etc. these
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a
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major
issues
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issue
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such
as air
pollution
,
water
pollution
, scarcity of
water
resources, climatic change etc.in connection to
this
we know that climatic change is a major environmental issue and the ozone
depleation
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depletion
and forest fire affected the amazon rain forests are leading environmental
issues
nowadays. In India, the capital city is highly affected
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the
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air
pollution
and in Kerala , rich in
water
resources currently facing
the
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water
pollution
and scarcity of fresh
water
and the best example is the highly polluted Chaliyar river in Kerala. To conclude, in my
opinion
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both the views are major environmental
issues
and both are connected to each other. Today the unrestricted activities of humans
leads
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to
the
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major environmental problems and it
also
affects the ecosystem and chains in the ecosystem.it is time up to think about not only the government but
also
each and every people about the need of environment for the survival and existence of
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world.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • biodiversity
  • extinction
  • habitat loss
  • ecosystem
  • food chain
  • imbalance
  • interconnected
  • climate change
  • pollution
  • personal actions
  • policy changes
  • education
  • awareness
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