Some people says that the environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals others says that there are more important environmental problems. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion?

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21st century, the existence of

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and the problems regarding

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is a crucial question

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. It is a major fact that if the world exists, the existence of

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has a major role. Today people are carrying different

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opinions

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about the

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as some of

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them

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views

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that the major

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we face are some of the species of animals and plants became endangered and another opinioned that it is more than that of some environmental

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exist.

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, the current

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faced by

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humans are the major environmental

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.it is opinioned true that in our time some particular varieties of plants and animals species became endangered.

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the major reason behind

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deforestation and the attack of people in the eco-sensitive zone.to illustrate

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the species

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as lion tailored monkey which was seen in the silent valley forest area in Kerala is because

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they

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a type of jack fruit which was seen in

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area. But nowadays the humans are entering into their area and destroying their ecosystem. So

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to the loss

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only the lion tailored monkey but

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the tree.

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, the other major environmental

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we are facing are the excavations, quarrying, soil filling in paddy fields and ponds and the construction of huge buildings, huge number of vehicles etc. these

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major

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issues

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as air

pollution

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,

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pollution

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, scarcity of

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resources, climatic change etc.in connection to

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we know that climatic change is a major environmental issue and the ozone

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depletion

and forest fire affected the amazon rain forests are leading environmental

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nowadays. In India, the capital city is highly affected

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air

pollution

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and in Kerala , rich in

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resources currently facing

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water

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and scarcity of fresh

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and the best example is the highly polluted Chaliyar river in Kerala. To conclude, in my

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both the views are major environmental

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and both are connected to each other. Today the unrestricted activities of humans

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to

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major environmental problems and it

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affects the ecosystem and chains in the ecosystem.it is time up to think about not only the government but

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each and every people about the need of environment for the survival and existence of

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world.