Some people says that the environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals others says that there are more important environmental problems. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion?
In
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21st century, the existence of world
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environment
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the environment
among
. It is a major fact that if the world exists, the existence of Change preposition
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environment
has a major role. Today people are carrying different Correct article usage
the environment
opinion
about the Fix the agreement mistake
opinions
environmental
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environment
such
as some of Change the pronoun
their
them
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the
views
that the major Change the verb form
view
issues
we face are some of the species of animals and plants became endangered and another opinioned that it is more than that of some environmental issues
exist.
However
, the current issues
faced by the
humans are the major environmental Correct article usage
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issues
.it is opinioned true that in our time some particular varieties of plants and animals species became endangered. That is
the major reason behind this
is the
deforestation and the attack of people in the eco-sensitive zone.to illustrate Correct article usage
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this
the species such
as lion tailored monkey which was seen in the silent valley forest area in Kerala is because of
they Change preposition
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are only eats
a type of jack fruit which was seen in Change the verb form
are only eating
this
area. But nowadays the humans are entering into their area and destroying their ecosystem. So this
will leads
to the loss Wrong verb form
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not
only the lion tailored monkey but Change preposition
of not
also
the tree.
In addition
, the other major environmental issues
we are facing are the excavations, quarrying, soil filling in paddy fields and ponds and the construction of huge buildings, huge number of vehicles etc. these are became
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are becoming
a
major Correct article usage
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issues
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issue
such
as air pollution
, water
pollution
, scarcity of water
resources, climatic change etc.in connection to this
we know that climatic change is a major environmental issue and the ozone depleation
and forest fire affected the amazon rain forests are leading environmental Correct your spelling
depletion
issues
nowadays. In India, the capital city is highly affected with
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by
the
air Correct article usage
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pollution
and in Kerala , rich in water
resources currently facing the
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water
pollution
and scarcity of fresh water
and the best example is the highly polluted Chaliyar river in Kerala.
To conclude, in my opinion
both the views are major environmental Add the comma(s)
,opinion
issues
and both are connected to each other. Today the unrestricted activities of humans leads
to Change the verb form
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the
major environmental problems and it Correct article usage
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also
affects the ecosystem and chains in the ecosystem.it is time up to think about not only the government but also
each and every people about the need of environment for the survival and existence of whole
world.Change the article
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