Some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals.Others say that there are more important environmental problems. Discuss both views and give your opinion

The impact of environmental challenges has been a hotly-debated topic.Some individuals argue that the core challenge in the modern era is the disappearance of specific

plants

and

animals

,whereas others say that there are more to it than meet the eye.In my view,environmental

impacts

are enormous and have affected the way of life. Individuals have different opinions on the problem of the environment.Some say that the major challenge has been the loss of some

plants

and

animals

.

This

is because of the facts that many deforestations that

occurs

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nowadays and lack of planting trees, as seen in the many areas.if the

plants

are cut for various reasons

then

many of the species are lost.

For instance

,the cutting of trees for the purpose of firewood.

Moreover

,

animals

are

also

lost owing to the illegal trade in the black market,after hunting the wild

animals

for personal individual gains their numbers start declining.

For example

,Kenya Wildlife reported an 80% decline in the number of elephants in the country.

Thus

,human activities have contributed to the highest loss of biodiversity not only in

plants

but

also

in

animals

.

On the other hand

,many negative environmental

impacts

still exist,since there are direct

impacts

that contribute to the challenges.

Firstly

,the development of industries has led to the increase in pollution to the surroundings

thus

creating more challenges for both living and non-living organisms as seen in the bio-degradation of important features within our habitat.Another problem is the disposal of e-waste,before it was not a major issue but ,

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currently

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it has sprouted has as a thorn in the flesh.To illustrate

this

many people are using electronic materials and are not able to dispose of them well

thus

leading to the accumulation of waste products.

Therefore

,pollution and electronic waste accumulation have added fuel to the already straining habitat. To sum up,

although

the modern world has seen a great decline in

plants

and animal species.I still believe that there are more negative

impacts

that still exist like environmental pollution from industries and

also

poor disposal of electronic wastes.