Your neighbours have recently written to you to complain about the noise from your house/ flat. Write a letter to your neighbours. In your letter explain the reasons for the noise apologise describe what action you will take

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Dear Sir/Madam, I know all of you who live near my house must be so uncomfortable recently because of the noise from my flat. I'm writing
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letter to say some things to all of you about why it's been so noisy recently. Because the roof on the house is broken, so my family needs to repair it to stay away from bad weather and some insects or animals may go inside our rooms. As you know, the climate is changing for the
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season and it is the rainy season so we have to fix the roof quickly. I apologize for making the noisy activities but I can ensure that I will end these soon because we have almost done with
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. My house will be done the
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day. So that's all, I hope Sir/Madam can understand
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emergency situation. And thanks for responding to us about the noise, I read all the letters. Thank you very much! Yours sincerely, Emma
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

  • firstly
  • secondly
  • thirdly
  • in additional
  • moreover
  • also
  • for example
  • for instance
  • therefore
  • however
  • although
  • even though
  • despite

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