Many working people get little or no exercise either during the working day or in their free time and have health problems as a result. do so many working people not get enough exercise? What can be done about this problem? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own experience or knowledge.

It is true that
workers
’ physical wellness problems due to the lack of sports activities
is
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one of the most important issues facing us today. From my perspective, I would state some reasons for these issues and solutions that could partly solve the problem.
First
of all, during the working day,
workers
often have to work from 9-to-5 so there is no
time
for
exercises
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. In many companies, employees would stick their eyes into computer screens the whole day. As a consequence, at the end of the day, they would not do exercise or go to the gym because their body was already exhausted.
Besides
, at weekends or holidays,
workers
would spend
time
with family or resting
instead
of sporty activities. The reason why
this
happened is
because
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during weekdays they did not have
time
to gather with family or take a rest.
However
, governments and employers could lower working hours, give
workers
more day-off in order to help them have more
time
to do exercise and take care of their health.
For example
, the UAE authority has implemented a policy to reduce working days per week from 6 days to 5.5 days. That means
workers
only have to work from Monday morning to Friday noon.
Thus
individuals would improve their physical health in order to work more efficiently. In conclusion, the main reason why
workers
tend to have health problems and do not have
time
to do exercise is the working hours of many companies.
Consequently
, the governments should make changes to reduce
this
problem.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Time constraints
  • Sedentary lifestyle
  • Passive leisure activities
  • Workplace wellness programs
  • Active commuting
  • Subsidized
  • Public awareness
  • Health benefits
  • Incentivizing
  • Accessible public spaces
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