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Your local bookshop has invited members of the public to recommend a guest speaker for an upcoming event that will include a series of talks from well-known people. Write an e-mail to the bookshop. In your email: Suggest a speaker Say what they would contribute to the event Explain why other people would be interested too

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Dear Sir or Madam: I am glad that you have given us readers an opportunity to suggest a guest speaker for the upcoming event
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 anniversary of your bookshop. I would suggest that you should invite the famous author Amish Tripathi, who has made a lasting impression on young minds through his new fiction series Shiva Trilogy. As everybody knows, Amish Tripathi is a graduate of IIT Delhi and has worked in corporate firms.
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, he decided to quit his job to follow his passion of becoming a writer. Through his speech, he can encourage youth to consider their interests while choosing a career rather than just getting influenced by what other people are opting for. His journey to becoming a successful writer has a very strong message for the younger generation. Amish excels in writing novels with out of the box ideas, which youngsters these days love to read. Owing to
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, he has a huge fan following. Many people will look forward to attending the event if he is the guest speaker. I hope you will consider my suggestion. Yours faithfully, Dorna Sadeghi
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