You recently went to a concert and thought one of te singers was very good. You want to tell him hoe you feel. Write a letter to the singer. In your letter - say how you feel about his performance -give details of your musical activities -explain how you would like him to help you with your musical activities
My name is Trisha Patel and doing a study in marketing management.I feel extremely superior when I attained a live concert. It was my
first
experience to see a live event .
Firstly
, I did not want to come but because of my mother
I have to come with her .I feel nostalgic when Add a comma
,mother
tolisten
Correct your spelling
to listen
your
Change preposition
to your
song
with amiable lyrics . Your melodious song
touches my heart. You have sung a song
with guitar ,it wants very nice due to that type of capability have a few masses.Furthermore
,you have a dynamic personality as a singer with a great dressing style.
I have also
been fascinated by singing so I had joined an eminent class which is located near my area but the tutor was always in a hurry to complete the class so they did not allow time for practice and you know it is exceedingly essential.
After listing your song
I admired from you so please if possible give me one chance to take some idea about singing lesson so I also
grow my career in this
field.
I am eagerly waiting for your prompt reply and I feel god bless me if u give me chance .
Thanks,
Yours sincerely,
Trusha PatelSubmitted by Trusha.p on
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The Greeting
Depending on the style and aim of the letter, you will need to adapt your greeting.
Always start an informal letter in the ways:
- Dear + name
- Hi / Hello + name
‘Dear...’ is more appropriate, so stick with this.
For a formal letter there are two options for the greeting:
- Use Dear Sir or Madam if you don’t know the name of the person you are writing to.
- Use Dear + surname if you do know their name, e.g. Dear Mr Smith or Dear Mrs Jones.