Write a letter to your friend inviting him/her to a music concert. Please say – Where and when does the concert start? – What type of music will be played there? – Why do you think your friend will enjoy it?

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Dear Robert I hope you are enjoying your new job. As

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two months. For breaking

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music

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concert

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on 31 December. The location of

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music

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concert

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is the central stadium of my city. As you know

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concert

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is on 31 Dec, Many musicians are planning to come there and present their talent, as I have gone through their website, around 50 well-known singers will join the show including top singers like Neha Kakkar and remixing all. In

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, performance is done on western as well as rock

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. I clearly knew that you enjoyed and love

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days. I will book the tickets for the

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week but before that please ensure me whether you are interested to join the

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. Waiting for your reply. Take care, See you soon Warm Wishes Akshay

Submitted by akshay.thakare2804 on Sun Dec 12 2021

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 5.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 5.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

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8 paragraphs

168 words

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Write a letter to your friend inviting him/her to a music concert. Please say – Where and when does the concert start? – What type of music will be played there? – Why do you think your friend will enjoy it?

Some people say that increasing price of petrol is the best way to solve growing traffic and pollution problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Some people believe that professionals such as doctors and engineers should be required to work in the country where they did their training. Others believe they should be free to work in another country if they wish. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

In some countries, university students live at home with their family while they study, whereas in other countries, students attend university in another city. Do you think the benefits of living away from home during university outweigh the disadvantages?