Write a letter to your friend inviting him/her to a music concert. Please say – Where and when does the concert start? – What type of music will be played there? – Why do you think your friend will enjoy it?

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Dear Robert I hope you are enjoying your new job. As
you
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aware that we did not meet
since
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in
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last
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the last
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two months. For breaking
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chain, here I would like to invite you
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to
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a
music
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concert
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which is going to
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on 31 December. The location of
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music
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concert
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is the central stadium of my city. As you know
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concert
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is on 31 Dec, Many musicians are planning to come there and present their talent, as I have gone through their website, around 50 well-known singers will join the show including top singers like Neha Kakkar and remixing all. In
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concert
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, performance is done on western as well as rock
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. I clearly knew that you enjoyed and love
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type of
music
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from
school
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your school
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days. I will book the tickets for the
concert
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on
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apply
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next
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week but before that please ensure me whether you are interested to join the
concert
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. Waiting for your reply. Take care, See you soon Warm Wishes Akshay
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