Write a letter to your friend inviting him/her to a music concert. Please say – Where and when does the concert start? – What type of music will be played there? – Why do you think your friend will enjoy it?

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Dear Robert I hope you are enjoying your new job. As

you

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aware that we did not meet

since

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last

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the last

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two months. For breaking

this

chain, here I would like to invite you

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music

concert

which is going to

be happen

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on 31 December. The location of

this

music

concert

is the central stadium of my city. As you know

this

concert

is on 31 Dec, Many musicians are planning to come there and present their talent, as I have gone through their website, around 50 well-known singers will join the show including top singers like Neha Kakkar and remixing all. In

this

concert

, performance is done on western as well as rock

music

. I clearly knew that you enjoyed and love

this

type of

music

from

school

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days. I will book the tickets for the

concert

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apply

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week but before that please ensure me whether you are interested to join the

concert

. Waiting for your reply. Take care, See you soon Warm Wishes Akshay

Submitted by akshay.thakare2804 on Sun Dec 12 2021

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2Word repetition
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7Grammar mistakes
 

8 paragraphs

168 words

7.00

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Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 5.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 5.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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Write a letter to your friend inviting him/her to a music concert. Please say – Where and when does the concert start? – What type of music will be played there? – Why do you think your friend will enjoy it?

Crime is a big problem in the world: many believe that nothing can be done to prevent it. To wahat extent do you agree or disagree?

Cyber bullying is rapidly growing into a major problem for young people today. What are some of the reasons for its growth? And what can be done to prevent it?

It is not necessary to travel to other places to learn about other cultures. We can learn as much as from books, films and internet. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Many governments think that economic progress is their most important goal. Some people, however, think that other types of progress are equally important for a country. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Nowadays, international tourism is the biggest industry in the world. Unfortunately, it creates tension rather than understanding between people from different cultures. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?