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University should accept equal number of male and female students in every subject. To what extent do you agree or disagree.

#university #students
The higher education institution should accept
same
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amount
 of
gender
 in every subject.
This
 essay will
be totally disagree
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 with
this
 perspective and will provide strong reasons as well as examples, to support them, before my conclusion will be reached. The main reason why universities should never do
this
, if higher education places will try to balance
number
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a number
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 of
students
 by
gender
 proportion in each subject it can lead to that
intellegent
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intelligent
students
 can be rejected because they accepted
right
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the right
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amount
 of
students
 for
this
gender
. An example to
ilustrate
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illustrate
this
 point is
university
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universities
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 require to accept 1000
students
 for maths
major
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majors
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,and they start the accept
students
.
Hovewer
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However
 in one moment they reached the 500 male and 499 female
students
, and they need the
last
 female student, but there
are
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 1 male student with higher marks in
test
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 and 1 female with less. It will be
wierd
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weird
wired
 if they accept female
student
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students
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instead
 of more clever male
students
, only for the reason that he is not
right
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the right
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gender
. Less important, but still have valid reason is in one moment they will have troubles with
amount
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the amount
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 of
students
. The best example to be considered with is for maths major usually try to enrol is male
students
.
Hovewer
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However
 if they will have balanced
number
 of
students
 university can face that it
have
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has
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 70 male
students
 and 50 female, and 20 male
students
 should be rejected since university try to balance
number
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a number
the number
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 of
students
. To sum up, if universities try to balance
amount
 of
students
 by
gender
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the gender
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 they can face
with
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quite a lot of problems,
such
 as
rejectance
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rejecting
reluctance
 of one sex
students
 since another reached the right
number
 of them or not
accept
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accepting
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 more
intellegent
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intelligent
undergraduate
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undergraduates
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 for the reasons that he or she doesn't fit by
gender
.
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