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Some people say that E-books and modern technology will totally replace traditional newspaper and magazines to what extent do you agree or disagree.

#people #e-books #technology #newspaper #magazines
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In our modern time,a lot of people all over the world choose e-
books
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instead
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 of
paper
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books
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.I agree with
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 conjecture that traditional
books
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 will disappear.So let us consider
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 topic more deeply.
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,we cannot deny the fact that in 21 century a huge number of people ,basically youth,prefer to use e-
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 because they are cheaper than
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books
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 .
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 ,these
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 are environmentally friendly.You do not need to cut down forests to create an e-book.A lot of experts paid attention to
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 problem in the
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 few decades .So now it is time for humanity to save our planet and the
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 step which society should do is to finish with
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books
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 to protect the Earth.
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,authors have their own profit .They can earn more because creating traditional
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 cost much higher than an electronic version.
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, changes probably will happen in the domain of newspapers and magazines .Nowadays ,all famous brands have youtube channels and
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 situation regarding magazines too. GQ,PLAYBOY,WOG and others in past were written only articles ,but now they make videos on their own channels and post their articles on websites. To draw the conclusion ,I can say that probably in the near future E-
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 replace
paper
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books
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. In my opinion ,it is a bright idea .If we did it ,we would save our planet .And
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, make consumption of content cheaper and more comfortable.
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