Some people do not go directly to college but travel or work for a short time. Do you think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

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students
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an opportunity to earn before even completing their academic
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due to technology.Some individuals get employed or go
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for a limited time rather than going to
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college as soon.The drawbacks are more than merits since the students
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a high chance of early marriage and dropping out of
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,learners who travel or work before attending college find themselves having responsibilities just by the touch of money.
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they end up getting married.Due to the technology being prominent that they get exposed in a way they forget about education.
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,just being away from
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environment keep the thought of going back to
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away.
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four leaves with high grades.
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,it is apparent that the exposure of not going on with schooling is high once the scholar travel or work before going to an institute.
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,dropping out of
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is a major consequence especially when an undergraduate has tasted money that they feel held on from earning or going for vacations.
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,they perform badly as their interest is disrupted from the usual flow of being in a learning environment,
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published a policy in 2021 for
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the transition
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of
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from secondary to university.Indeed,in the modern world comparing to
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times
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drop out
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is high and again many students in higher learning are multitasking. To sum up,the society stopped reporting immediately to university rather
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abroad or labour for a short time has led to several scholars be multitasking due to many
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responsibility
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