There are many different types of music in the world today. Why do we need music? Is the traditional music of a country more important than the International music that is heard everywhere nowadays?

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.The majority of the population from different nations believe that instrumental sounds have an indispensable position in our lives due to many reasons.Meanwhile,a popular belief is that conventional country tones are more important than international songs.In the following essay, I will explain my own view. It is widely accepted that the

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industry plays a colossal role in today's world and every individual

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it as a vital part of

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life.I strongly agree with

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has therapeutic effects.

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the findings that when

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play a calm melody during surgeries the probability of success increase because a symphony is tension_free and

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ease the pressure out.

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is highly appreciated for its representation of

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of a country so from

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perspective the majority of folks claimed that traditional songs are much more momentous than overseas ones.I entirely support

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,Iran has

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special style in

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and their poems indicate the history and the civilization of that country.So,if they start to just listen to Western

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,they will ruin and forget their past generation.So, in my opinion, every nation should

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its unique style in

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. In conclusion, every sound we make is

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and it is crucial for our existence,

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never disremember your originality.By the way,it seems to me that in the near future youngsters can not recognize their motherland melodies.