Some parents believe that home schooling is more beneficial than the traditional schools. What is your opinion.

There is an argument among parents about whether homeschooling is more advantageous than

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traditional schooling or not.

Although

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homeschooled

children

can be trained and taught regarding

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their

talents

, they may lack in their future relationships and communications. The

children

who are homeschooled have the chance to learn regarding their

talents

and abilities and learn how to improve them. In traditional

schools

, most of the teachers are using particular guidelines to teach;

therefore

,

children

with different types of learning styles may have some difficulties in learning their lessons.

Furthermore

, in traditional schooling teaching materials are fixed,

such

as mathematics, physics and physical education, and

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parents and teachers believe that some lessons,

such

as mathematics, carry more weight rather than others;

thus

for the students with different

talents

such

as art may feel bad about themselves because they feel insufficient, not talented or smart enough.

Therefore

, when

children

are homeschooled, each individual can be taught in a proper way to find out what is his or her ability and passion to improve, with no judgments, though by changing the methods of teaching and grading in traditional

schools

, the problem may be solved. Alternatively,

children

who attend

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traditional

schools

have the chance to socialize and learn how to communicate. When

children

spend some time with their peers, they will learn how to manage their relationships with each type of personality.

Also

, they will be able to improve their teamwork skills. According to the nature of humans which is being social, later in life, they will need to communicate with others at work, parties and so on;

thus

knowing how to have a better relationship with others is a must which should be learnt

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younger age and by experiencing different situations. All things considered, some parents believe that homeschooling is more beneficial than traditional

schools

. Though

children

who are homeschooled may recognize their

talents

and passion easily and be able to follow them, they may confront some difficulties in their future communications. I believe, by improving the methods of teaching and grading in traditional

schools

, they would be more beneficial.