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The given graphs compare the average
precipitation
 and
temperature
 of
Brasilia
 and
Recife
, two Brazilian cities,
in addition
, information about the average hours of sunshine and number of days with thunder is
also
 depicted. Overall, in
Recife
, the
precipitation
 is more intense between April and July, while in
Brasilia
, the average
mm
 per
month
 is the lowest, during the same period.
Furthermore
,
Brasilia
 has a higher thermic amplitude than
Recife
. In
Brasilia
, the rainfall season goes from October to March with an average of
precipitation
 between 150 and 250
mm
 and around 20 wet days per
month
, whereas, dry season, with
precipitation
 approximately less than 50mm per
month
, happens from May to August.
In contrast
, in
Recife
, during the period between March to July, the rain levels range from 150 to 250
mm
 per
month
, while during the months of September to January the levels go down to less than 50mm. With regards to
temperature
, In
Brasilia
, the months of July to October, have the highest temperatures, peaking up to 35
ºC
, and from May to August, the minimum
temperature
 is the lowest, around 5
ºC
.
However
, the average
temperature
 remains steady all year long, varying from 28
ºC
 to 15ª, except between June and August, when the minimum is around 10
ºC
.
On the other hand
, in
Recife
, the highest
temperature
 is almost 40
ºC
, during almost the whole year except in April, July and August while the minimum
temperature
 is 15
ºC
 during June. In
this
 city, the average
temperature
 remains steady between 25
ºC
 and 30
ºC
 during almost all year. It is
also
 noticeable in the chart, that
Brasilia
 has, on average, fewer hours of sun than
Recife
, but an average number of thunder days much higher than
Recife
.
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