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People are using a lot of online language translation apps. Do the benefits of this outweigh the disadvantages?

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Nowadays many
people
 like to
use
language
 translation through to the mobile
systerm
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system
. I believe
this
 is a good activity for the
people
 who want to learn
second
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language
,
however
,
some time
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people
 rely on the apps too much, which
it
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will make them
lost
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 the ambition of learning. In today society, everybody using
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a smart
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smart phone
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smartphone
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, as our living area has been grown rippenly with high-
tecnologies
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technologies
 for years. A translation tool can make
people
 easy to understand the word they have not been touch or
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.
Also
, if a Western person travelling
to
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oversea
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 which they cannot understand the foreign
language
 they can just simply
to
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use
the
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google translate to their
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owe
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language
.
Furthermore
, if
a
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an
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oversea
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overseas
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 student studying
a
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 English word,
this
 app is very helpful for them, which
it
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is so easy for them.
Although
,
transtation
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translation
appa
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app
 has a lot of benefits,
however
 sometimes
people
has
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over used
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overused
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 it.
For example
, a learner should learn
the
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a
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 new word by using a dictionary, which a translation machine
sometime
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 cannot accurate
to
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express
the
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meaning.
Moreover
, some
people
relying
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 on
this
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 apps for
the
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dating websites, after they are fall in love and meet each other face to face, but they cannot speak
with
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the same
language
,
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 so that they need to
use
this
 app for
they
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their
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life
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. In
conclution
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conclusion
, I believe nowadays students are relyed on
the
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apps or google translate too much, as a good learner should be using the traditional way which is a dictionary.
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