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The pie chart describes the amount of revenue and expenditures in the USA in one year. The revenue has six aspects while the
expenditure
 has only three. Overall, the chart shows that in fund expenses of donated food has the maximum volume of money earned while in
expenditure
 has the maximum number spent on
program
 services. These both are the highest amounts than others. According to the
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fund sources interprets, more than a
third
-half of the amount received in donated foods, with almost 87%. Community contributions and other income obtained around 10%.
program
 fund and other income earned around 2% and 0.4 % respectively.
By contrast
, investment income and government grants both have received the same volume which is 0.2%. According to the
expenditure
 describes, almost 96% had spent on
program
 services. Fundraising and management and general have spent almost 3% and 2% respectively. More than 95% of
expenditure
 in
program
 services other remaining 5% has balance two aspects.
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