Some older people struggle with the use of modern electronic technology, such as smartphones and computers. What are the reasons, give solutions?

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In the present scenario,
technology
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has become an indispensable part
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every person life.
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it is sometimes thought that older people face trouble when they are using modern
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. In
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essay, I will consider which factors
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this
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situation and possible solutions. There are several reasons why elderly persons are getting difficulties
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using electronic
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. The
first
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and foremost important thing is that less knowledge of how to
use
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technology
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. They are not more aware
about
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all applications and
comupter's
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computer's
function.
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, applications
such
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as
,
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apply
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facebook
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,
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app,
instagram
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Instagram
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,
twitter
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,
amazone
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amazon
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, and so on.
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, lack of information and proficiency are responsible for
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matter. Another reason to consider the
use
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of modern electronic
technology
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is hard for senior citizens means the
language
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is used in smartphones and computers is most probably
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in
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English
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.
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is not
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first
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language
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in every country.
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, every people can not understand
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language
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easily.
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, one
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survey
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has conducted in the Uk, there are more than 70% retired persons
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do not know
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.
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, all websites are
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in
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,
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is
also
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resistance
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by
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use
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the use
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of
technology
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On the other hand
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, it is hard to get appropriate ways but, it is not impossible to work out on
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prolem
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problem
. and, numerous ways are available.
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, every
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should encourage
to
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older
peole
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people
to learn
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English
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the English
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language
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.
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, the government should organise some
program
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to learn how to
use
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modern
technology
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. In conclusion, it is true that older people struggle with the
use
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of modern
technology
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, but the problem should not neglect and should take help some possible solutions.
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