Describe a time you got lost in a place you did not know about. What did it happen Who was with you What did you do How you felt about it

I lost at Delhi railway station.
This
incident
was happened
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happened
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10 years ago when me and my
father
going
for
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to
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attend
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attending
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the marriage of my cousin.
i
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I
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drop my
father
hand by mistake after
sometime
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some time
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I realised that
i
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I
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was lost and my
father
was not with me so I am crying after
few
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a few
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minutes one officer came to me and said to me why you are crying I tell him everything
then
he take me to his office and announced at
station
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the station
a station
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that one boy lost his
father
and his name is Ashish if his
father
listened me please meet me at enquiry office .after 10 minutes my
father
find me and we all are happy and me and my
father
thanks that officer after that
day
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I am more aware and never face that type of situation in life again.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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