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Children should never be educated at home. Do you Agree

#children #home
In the
last
 year and a half, we have all experienced what it is like to study from home.
Although
 it looked good at
first
 - I didn't have to hurry to
school
 in the morning, I didn't waste time on the road. But gradually, these benefits began to give way to the negative aspects of
study
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 from home, which accumulated over time, so I fully believe that children should attend
school
. Let's start with one of the most pressing issues of recent times, namely depression among young people.
First
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 we live in a digital world, the phone
steal
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 the real communication between young people and when we add homeschooling
this
 become
major
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 issue for
the
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mental health.
In addition
 , that
school
-age kids can’t build their personalities.
For instance
, they will not have their own personalities and be like exactly their parents.
As a result
, mothers and fathers will raise their copies.
Other
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 main issue is that the parents are not
expert
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 in every field we study in
school
 with sure they cannot explain and make us understand in the way like our teacher will do. Recent researches clearly show that the level of knowledge is dropping since
the
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homeschooling
start
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. In conclusion, I think that students should go to
school
 and be with people
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 the same age. Build their independence, confidence, learn and gain experience from different sources and not only from their parents.
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