Some people think that hosting an international sports event is good for the country, while some people think it is bad. Discuss both views and state your opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

In general, due to the current ever-growing

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development and

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expansion of the world, more and more

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, namely, Olympic Games, World Cup and other sports

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have been organized to tighten the relationship of different nations. It is often argued that there are numerous advantages, whilst others disagree and point out the drawbacks. In my point of view, I am convinced that these worldwide

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bring lots of benefits for the hosted

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generally and the citizen particularly. As a matter of fact, it is undeniable about the beneficial gain in both finance and mental aspects that can be earned by hosting sports

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is imperative for the overall growth of any

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since it helps to attract massive of tourists who come to visit and various invited celebrities to advertise the hosted

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resolves the shortage of occupation issues of that current

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by providing a stable amount of jobs in a prolonged period of time, mostly in

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stage. Tokyo Olympics is a prime example, according to the Japanese government’s official report that

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brought about more than 30 billion dollars in revenue and

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introduced the world to some of the finest and unique traditions

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as modesty, friendliness and perfectionism.

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, many disagree and have contrasting thoughts. In fact, the

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point of attention is always synonymous with rising chances to bring chaos to the

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is event hosting

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. High people density locations like stadiums, entertainment places

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act as magnets to draw

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attention to criminals, trafficking and drugs.

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, the crime rate can be controlled by responsible security guards and professional methods. In conclusion, despite the minor effect of downside’s international

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, their pros obviously outweigh the cons. In my opinion, most of the consequences of crimes that could happen during

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are not difficult to be minimized or wiped out by the strict promulgated laws.