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It is impossible to help all the people in the world who need help, so governments should help people in their own countries. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

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Due to the enormous count of indeed
people
 around the world, it is impossible to help them all, so administrators should assist their own citizens. I strongly agree with
this
 statement and I think governments should prioritize their own
people
.
First
 and foremost, governments of underdeveloped
countries
 can exploit the assistance from developed
nations
. The Authority of many underprivileged
nations
 have the ability to misuse the charity sent by other
countries
 and in
this
 situation, financial supports and food supplies cannot reach exactly the intended
people
. Take into consideration, my
country
, Iran as a poor one after an earthquake disaster in a city called Sar Pol Zahab in 2018, many
countries
 like Canada, Turkey and Germany sent lots of financial supports for
people
 who lost their houses, but because of the corrupt government we have these financial aids have not received by the
people
 in need, and even after three years, they are still living in tents, in 2021.
Furthermore
,
people
 in a
country
 expect their government to ensure a Healthy Standard of Living for its citizen. They pay tax to make their
country
 a better community to live in, so they have an absolutely enormous role in contribution development in their nation and they need their authorities to prioritize for sure their fellow citizens who need help over other countrymen.
For example
, Germans are stubborn opponents for helping other underdeveloped
countries
 like African ones. They strictly insist on their administrators to allocate all the facilities for their own countrymen and improve education and health care system. Some may argue that assisting
people
 overseas is the humanitarian obligation of welfare
countries
 ,
however
, I think in all
nations
 it is possible to find poor
people
 who suffer from poverty, starvation, and low quality of life. So all the governments have the chance to offer a hand to help their own countrymen and I believe they must do it. To sum up, I think the government of any
country
 should allocate its resources to its own
people
 because they cannot be sure their assistance reaches the deserving individuals in other
nations
,
in addition
 to some demands exist in their own land.
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